Peer Evaluation for 20301 고건

Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
This essay deserves five points. It is great and persuasive.

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
I think introduction should be more attractive.

Thesis
What is the thesis?
The human behavior radically comes from emotions rather than reason.

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes I think so.

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
Most of the human behaviors comes from emotions rather than reason.

Any other thoughts?
I think it's enough, but he should use clear words than now

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis?
I think he should use more attractive introduction because it's just simple and not unique.

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
Yes. But I think narration includes some of the contents of refutation...

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
Yes.

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
I think refutation and concession part was great.

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis?
Yes.

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
introduction part should be more attractive, and some contents of narration part should be deleted.

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
I agreed.

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
I still agree.

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
X

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
I don't think he should change his contentions.

Research
Is the author using research effectively?
Yes

Is the research from appropriate sources?
Yes!

Are the sources obvious?
Yes

Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
Usually. He found some scholars' papers.

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
I think it's enough.